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Sunday, March 13, 2011

when a soul cries

she never told me
 what made her do it...
what could drive someone
 to play God
 and dangle,helplessly,
from the edge of nothingness...
a jack knife dive
 into the belly of the beast.
soaring high on the puff,puff pass
 that erased years of morality.
mama cried...daddy was used and told lies~
then daddy died,
making her cry.
yet she remained steadfast,
taking the low road to redemption 
at sanity's expense.
through pleads that fell upon deaf ears,
a mind torn and tattered.
body worn and weary,
wandering decay filled streets 
to quench a thirst
 that will never cease.
eyes stream morphine drips 
that resemble anger tinged demons~
smiling her demise.
yet my love remains,
for she is flesh of my flesh 
and we
 flesh of those that have passed on...
where does she belong?

10 comments:

  1. great word play....the puff puff pass...and mama cried, daddy...lied....where does she belong, perhaps unknowing is the reason....

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  2. she belongs to us all...that's brutally poignant

    "eyes stream morphine drips that resemble anger tinged demons"...yet drugs may not be the issue, this image still works well

    Peace, hp

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  3. "decay filled streets to quench a thirst that will never cease" and "eyes stream morphine drips" (literally tears of drugs) Great work, wridz

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  4. I really enjoyed the flow of this poem, and I felt for this person; you made me feel for her. Wonderful write!

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  5. emotion filled piece..very well executed.
    my fav. line is..dangle,helplessly,from the edge of nothingness.. says so much..

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  6. What drove her to it? So much said in so few words. Dangling from the edge of nothingness is a great line x

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