if this feeling is wrong
then let me dine on a feast
of my imperfections.
never has the desire,
to be held and caressed,
thrilled me~
drenched my every thought
with yearning.
to say that once is enough
would be a lie
from the abyss of never...
the soft inviting warmth
of your smile
envelopes my need
and satiates my hunger.
yet only the heat of your lips
divine
can make my soul quiver,
with anticipation,
for the gentleness of your touch...
set my mind adrift
on cool waters filled with the sights
and sounds
of your mounting pleasure.
the touch,the feel of your skin
against my tongue
tasting delights
forbidden.
fantasies throb and remain burning
as none so true
has enraptured my heart
making a home so virtuous.
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we have needs...a nicely penned tone of desire
ReplyDeletePeace, hp
Hot stuff. We shared a theme on this One Shot. Mine taking a more classical approach. But love is love man...in any language!
ReplyDeletesmoking one shot man...i really like how you are playing with structure, it allows you to put emphasis where you want it...
ReplyDeleteAbsolute a lover of this moment...
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ReplyDeletethe soft inviting warmth"
In that line you capture so much of the unstated prelude to what follows... Agree with Brian's comment about your structure. A steamy one shot.
Ahhh!!! Sensuous and exciting... loved the way you paint it all with passion....
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
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ReplyDeletenice one!