tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5862112059856615080.post3374780074502191183..comments2023-04-11T04:19:19.458-04:00Comments on WURDZ p03tRy: in flightAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08660545422931632039noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5862112059856615080.post-22028944274959257052012-03-05T06:05:31.779-05:002012-03-05T06:05:31.779-05:00It is your "laden with heritage" that is...It is your "laden with heritage" that is both the anchor and the sail in this remarkable poem. I really admire your take on the prompt.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5862112059856615080.post-57944970385662598832012-03-04T13:35:36.638-05:002012-03-04T13:35:36.638-05:00Wurdz, thanks for connecting with my piece. I real...Wurdz, thanks for connecting with my piece. I really like this opening...<br />into the expanse<br />a soul floats.<br />soaring over the forgotten memories<br />labeled yesteryear,<br /><br />My friends and I shared such a compassionate moment when releasing the ashes into the sea. Your poem danced around the moment like the beautiful waves that called to us.<br />Looking forward to reading more of your work.newdigitalscapeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05854411298020181549noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5862112059856615080.post-48790992829651682662012-03-04T04:06:14.390-05:002012-03-04T04:06:14.390-05:00you capture the scene well...what sticks out for m...you capture the scene well...what sticks out for me is..<br />take the reverse course<br />and share a tale<br />patwa heavy,<br />laden with heritage.<br />set free<br />to roam the universe~ there's so much possibility in this...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5862112059856615080.post-38832546042776393172012-03-04T00:08:14.808-05:002012-03-04T00:08:14.808-05:00your sentiment is strong and emotion is subtle but...your sentiment is strong and emotion is subtle but def felt here. a softer, more delicate feel compared to what I have read from you in the past. I enjoy all that I read from you a lot but this one touched me on a different level. Thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5862112059856615080.post-82133933855952523142012-03-03T19:26:26.338-05:002012-03-03T19:26:26.338-05:00Your opening line is lovely. These words speak t...Your opening line is lovely. These words speak to me : <br /><br />now adrift in the hereafter<br />singing,<br />"when we could fly."Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5862112059856615080.post-4928164099894735992012-03-03T19:16:06.835-05:002012-03-03T19:16:06.835-05:00beautiful creation you have made here, the sentime...beautiful creation you have made here, the sentiment of soul's truth carried in a lovely way...enjoyed the tie in of "patwa" pulled a earthen sense of those remaining waiting to take on the expression of flight. ~ RoseAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09988016086874324471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5862112059856615080.post-55318900750512945942012-03-03T18:09:33.753-05:002012-03-03T18:09:33.753-05:00eternity once known...oh man we can still fly...gr...eternity once known...oh man we can still fly...great opening with the soul floating over yesteryear....great play on the prompt today man...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com